I feel it is a little overexposed..the details on some whites seems blown; I like the composition as is.I played a bit with levels, curves, s/h to get this - http://vandana.smugmug.com/photos/139802150-L.jpg
a little less exposure and all..tell me if it is any better
yes, i think it looks better, but then i wouldn't have suggested it if i thought it would make it worse. again, it's just my opinion -- i thought the center was too static. moving it out a little frees up the eye to roam a little....
wherz SS when he's needed??? maybe V can help - she does flowers. having almost no flower (esp, white) experience and probably breaking rules, i would crop to move the flower center out of the center -- yes, it cuts off some of the petals.